My Version:
The leaves crunched as he planted his foot on the green path. The figure of an old cracked grey wall raised in front of his innocent eyes. He felt the sharp crumbly rock on his finger as it bled a single tear of blood. Hauling his body over the slightly crumbling wall, he fell down and planted his feet on the ground. The Rapunzel shined like the sun, brighter than the other crops, wandering towards the Rapunzel plant with guilt. Grasping the shiny green plant and pulled it out with ease, dawdling towards the old gravely wall again but heavy breathing caught his attention. Spinning around as quick as lighting to the sight of a wrinkly wart infested witch. The witch turned her grin into a frown before scowling at him with anger. He started to quiver before dropping on his knees and pleading with fear. The witch slowly approached the man before boldly yelling at him. She sighed with annoyance before accepting his useless offer to take the child when it was born. The man slipped on the dirty mud patch before scattering scared, his heart almost bursting out of his chest. He climbed back over the dusty ancient wall before returning huffing and puffing.
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