Great effort Eden and Bridget with this piece of writing. I like the way you were willing to take on feedback to make your writing the best it could be. Your next step in writing is to really think about your word choices and make them interesting and at a high level. Bridget, I look forward to seeing you further progress in your writing this year, no doubt there will be some more bunny themed texts! Miss J
Great effort Eden and Bridget with this piece of writing. I like the way you were willing to take on feedback to make your writing the best it could be. Your next step in writing is to really think about your word choices and make them interesting and at a high level. Bridget, I look forward to seeing you further progress in your writing this year, no doubt there will be some more bunny themed texts! Miss J
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