Welcome to my blog. I am a student at Lake Brunner School in Moana, near Greymouth, NZ.
Kia ora my name is Ngapua I go to Kawakawa primary school it's really interesting that whats going to happened at the end of the story I think that you need work on is that you need to look and the screen and tell us more detail.
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Kia ora my name is Ngapua I go to Kawakawa primary school it's really interesting that whats going to happened at the end of the story I think that you need work on is that you need to look and the screen and tell us more detail.
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